Sunday, October 10, 2010
Vicious World 1.25 & 1.26, or: DANTE APPEARS; READERSHIP INCREASES A HUNDRED-FOLD
...okay; a bit of a joke there. Anyway, I won't say too much except that this past week was rather exhausting as I worked longer hours at work, and as a result was unable to complete the archives (I will work on it this week), and I neglected to handle reader comments, which WILL be taken care of Tuesday.
In the meantime: Dante Dane's official debut in the new continuity.
...and there you go, so far. This is also the first appearance of Seong-Ho's main skateboard, for those who care about such trivia. Regarding Dante; I feel it would be better to introduce him as someone you wouldn't think is anything other than some hungover, surly British guy who sleeps until four in the afternoon.
Next week: Chris tells his story! There's fighting involved!
In the meantime: Dante Dane's official debut in the new continuity.
...and there you go, so far. This is also the first appearance of Seong-Ho's main skateboard, for those who care about such trivia. Regarding Dante; I feel it would be better to introduce him as someone you wouldn't think is anything other than some hungover, surly British guy who sleeps until four in the afternoon.
Next week: Chris tells his story! There's fighting involved!
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HURR HURR HURRRRRRRR.
- *fais perks up* PANTLESS?
- Its funny cos only yesterday I was talking about HOT GUYS WITHOUT SHIRTS ON AND SEXY PANTS/JEANS 0ERYG0ERY8G AREUHI4G
- DAT DIALOGUE <3
- HOT GUY NO SHIRT ETC 0AERYG9AERGRGE
- Chris' face at the end of the first page is OMGFUCKWIN<3
- Second page, Dante side on? That has improved SO MUCH since KHRS (Kazuya side on, knocking on Lars' door). It looks absolutely amazing <3 Well done ^^
- PSP JIN HNNNNNNNNGH
- PAVEMENT X SEONG=HO = NEW OTP
- *fais perks up* PANTLESS?
- Its funny cos only yesterday I was talking about HOT GUYS WITHOUT SHIRTS ON AND SEXY PANTS/JEANS 0ERYG0ERY8G AREUHI4G
- DAT DIALOGUE <3
- HOT GUY NO SHIRT ETC 0AERYG9AERGRGE
- Chris' face at the end of the first page is OMGFUCKWIN<3
- Second page, Dante side on? That has improved SO MUCH since KHRS (Kazuya side on, knocking on Lars' door). It looks absolutely amazing <3 Well done ^^
- PSP JIN HNNNNNNNNGH
- PAVEMENT X SEONG=HO = NEW OTP
# posted by 
: October 10, 2010 at 12:20 AM
: October 10, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Ha! Panel 1:25:5. Hahahaha!
1:25:1 Love how you do Dante looking away. This has so much movement and you really have honed some skills in the past few . . . months and years. Crazy skills.
1:25:4 Chris's face, the shading/expression/angle = perfection.
Suggestion: When doing a flashback, perhaps you would do something to better show the reader that "we" have shifted to a different place and time. In this case, I suggest rounding the corners of the panel perhaps. Typically in comics this is done in an obvious way with a "dialog box" at the top of the first panel in a flashback as a sort of voice over with the action taking place below. Or the shading/coloring/style is done differently, less defined usually, to visually express to the reader "this is not the same place/time as the last panel."
Just a suggestion. You know me. Always with the (annoying) ideas.
1:25:1 Love how you do Dante looking away. This has so much movement and you really have honed some skills in the past few . . . months and years. Crazy skills.
1:25:4 Chris's face, the shading/expression/angle = perfection.
Suggestion: When doing a flashback, perhaps you would do something to better show the reader that "we" have shifted to a different place and time. In this case, I suggest rounding the corners of the panel perhaps. Typically in comics this is done in an obvious way with a "dialog box" at the top of the first panel in a flashback as a sort of voice over with the action taking place below. Or the shading/coloring/style is done differently, less defined usually, to visually express to the reader "this is not the same place/time as the last panel."
Just a suggestion. You know me. Always with the (annoying) ideas.
So our first revelation of Dante is him without a shirt with our protagonists wondering if he's wearing pants or not. What comes right after that? Some sexual innuendo, of course!
Dante's abs aren't as defined Myko's: that means he just needs to work out harder!
Dante's abs aren't as defined Myko's: that means he just needs to work out harder!
# posted by : October 10, 2010 at 8:06 AM
: October 10, 2010 at 8:06 AM
Pantless?, yummy :P
OMG Did I see Jin on the PSP's screen? I think I did :D
I loved the dialogue in this one xD
And the faces <3 OMG love~
See, this time you get a short comment from yours truly :D Keep up the amazing work!
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OMG Did I see Jin on the PSP's screen? I think I did :D
I loved the dialogue in this one xD
And the faces <3 OMG love~
See, this time you get a short comment from yours truly :D Keep up the amazing work!
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